Morning Poem # 1

Posted on | September 18, 2006 | 18 Comments

I open the corral gate to a new day and
the white pony of hope gallops out long legged.

Both of us are throwing back our heads,
pressing our knees to the mud, praising the sun.

But shadows grow long, and the sickle of sorrow
makes the grass lie down. Things are never what we expect.

Already you can see the buzzards circling.
The colt’s rib bones, like twelve new moons,
make white silhouettes against the greening grass.

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18 Responses to “Morning Poem # 1”

  1. Jess
    September 18th, 2006 @ 9:46 pm
  2. lizardek
    September 19th, 2006 @ 2:38 am

    That was a punch to the gut of a poem. wow.

  3. athena
    September 19th, 2006 @ 4:37 am

    not sure if this is what you wanted us to do, but i wrote a poem after reading yours today. i’ve enjoyed reading your blog. very inspirational. thank you.

  4. athena
    September 19th, 2006 @ 4:38 am

    not sure if this is what you wanted us to do, but i wrote a poem after reading yours today. i’ve enjoyed reading your blog. very inspirational. thank you.

    i would learn all the world dialects for you:
    http://www.lotr.homelinux.net/nutritilicious/archives/308

  5. samantha
    September 19th, 2006 @ 8:37 am

    Oh! The poor pony!

    Yet so beautiful that I just let the words sing and then had to go back to read again.

    Here’s my morning poem – or click on my name -

    http://sundayschoolrebel.typepad.com/sundayschoolrebel/2006/09/morning_poem_on.html

  6. la vie en rose
    September 19th, 2006 @ 5:49 pm

    beautiful

  7. Teri
    September 19th, 2006 @ 6:20 pm

    WOW…the colt’s ribs like 12 new moons…that is so vivid, Christina. You are a master. I love your way with words…

  8. wendy cook
    September 20th, 2006 @ 12:03 pm

    a very forboding, and beautiful poem

  9. September mornings at {my topography}
    September 23rd, 2007 @ 10:34 pm

    [...] week I want to return to something I did last September. A poem a day. A morning poem. Whatever words come to mind to paint the colored arc of soul and [...]

  10. Christina Milian
    October 17th, 2007 @ 9:05 am

    Hey!…Man i love reading your blog, interesting posts ! it was a great Wednesday

  11. Christina Milian
    November 13th, 2007 @ 6:08 pm

    Hello webmaster…Man i love reading your blog, interesting posts ! it was a great Tuesday

  12. Christina Milian
    November 23rd, 2007 @ 6:04 pm

    Hey!…Man i love reading your blog, interesting posts ! it was a great Friday

  13. Christina Milian
    December 1st, 2007 @ 2:03 am

    Hi there…Thanks for the nice read, keep up the interesting posts..what a nice Saturday

  14. Christina Milian
    January 4th, 2008 @ 6:03 pm

    Hey!…Man i just love your blog, keep the cool posts comin..holy Friday

  15. Christina Milian
    January 7th, 2008 @ 10:04 am

    Hello…Thanks for the nice read, keep up the interesting posts..what a nice Monday

  16. Christina Milian
    January 8th, 2008 @ 6:00 am

    Hi…Man i just love your blog, keep the cool posts comin..holy Tuesday

  17. Christina Milian
    January 10th, 2008 @ 2:03 am

    Hi there…Man i just love your blog, keep the cool posts comin..holy Thursday

  18. {my topography} - At it again
    October 1st, 2009 @ 3:01 am

    [...] I’m thinking of doing morning poems again, as a way to slip back into writing for real. I have done morning poems in the past, and have loved it when you have joined me. I’ve gotten so much this exchange. [...]

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